Sunday, January 24, 2010

#4





in the misty day
not growing older...
grave stones

Kingston New Brunswick Canada

in the misty day
not growing older...
grave tablets
(by Issa, Japan 19th century)
I'm working on a revision (beyond stones for tablets - a wooden Japanese marker of the time) to eliminate the gerund (growing). My aim is to use present tense verbs.


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